minus-squareMLTay@alien.topBtoBooks•Would you read this?linkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up1·10 months agoUnfortunately this is incoherent. I mean this kindly but she should go back to basics - focus on how to structure a paragraph. Beginning, middle, end. Sentence structure. This is just a stream of consciousness mess that doesn’t convey a point. linkfedilink
Unfortunately this is incoherent. I mean this kindly but she should go back to basics - focus on how to structure a paragraph. Beginning, middle, end. Sentence structure. This is just a stream of consciousness mess that doesn’t convey a point.