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Cake day: November 20th, 2023

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  • I thought it was really good. What stuck out to me was how subtly the author progressed Charlie’s intelligence. You don’t really notice until about halfway toward the peak of his intelligence when you realize, hey when did he stop saying that? I just think it’s difficult to make things gradual, but he did really well at gradually increasing his intelligence.